Comments on: James “Rhio” O’Connor Memorial Scholarship Fund Essay http://tomholowka.com/blog/james-rhio-oconnor-memorial-scholarship-fund-essay/ Health for a Conscious World Sun, 25 Apr 2010 19:06:15 -0700 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.5 hourly 1 By: Tom Holowka http://tomholowka.com/blog/james-rhio-oconnor-memorial-scholarship-fund-essay/comment-page-1/#comment-195 Tom Holowka Fri, 12 Feb 2010 01:50:31 +0000 http://tomholowka.com/?p=366#comment-195 Hey Alberto thanks for reading and leaving your opinion. Much appreciated!! I wrote the essay purposefully, but maybe I didn't explain why as clearly as I could have. Everything I wrote in the post were my alternatives beyond chemotherapy. The guidelines to follow for cancer prevention are the same as guidelines if you already have cancer. I probably could have made that clearer in the essay. I could see how you would think that's a little confusing. Does that make sense? Hey Alberto thanks for reading and leaving your opinion. Much appreciated!!

I wrote the essay purposefully, but maybe I didn’t explain why as clearly as I could have. Everything I wrote in the post were my alternatives beyond chemotherapy. The guidelines to follow for cancer prevention are the same as guidelines if you already have cancer. I probably could have made that clearer in the essay. I could see how you would think that’s a little confusing.

Does that make sense?

]]> By: alberto negrellos http://tomholowka.com/blog/james-rhio-oconnor-memorial-scholarship-fund-essay/comment-page-1/#comment-194 alberto negrellos Thu, 11 Feb 2010 21:07:02 +0000 http://tomholowka.com/?p=366#comment-194 hey dude, like the essay format and how you broke it down. the only thing is you failed to follow directions. The essay is about how would you conduct your research, or would you consider alternatives beyond chemotherapy. The point being, you have to write as if you already had cancer. hey dude, like the essay format and how you broke it down. the only thing is you failed to follow directions. The essay is about how would you conduct your research, or would you consider alternatives beyond chemotherapy. The point being, you have to write as if you already had cancer.

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